SilentTakedown 2008-02-06 09:52:24

Hi,

Here on Newgrounds are no place for extremly beginners.
I don't know people here, who want to leave comments on those tracks. Sorry!
You should work hard and show the songs your friends, and if you made some very fantastic tracks, I would submit them.

I heard some of your songs and I can say only one thing: You don't know how music is constructed. You should make your melodies in the rythm and use accords, too.

You have time to submit good tracks.
Go practice for it. That's the only I can say.

Good luck on your next songs.

Cya

- Intero

P34C3 2008-02-06 17:55:36

Hey dont listen to Intero. He doesnt know what the hell hes talking about. Your funny Piano remix was GENIOUS!!! Dont let the haters get at you brother. You will be playing in the cathedral next to jesus on Bass God on drums and NEDM on Vocal.

I am a fan of yours. Striaght up. And if you look at the other reviews of that song you will know that the masses aggree. I would press that shit to vinal asap so It can hit the trance circut fast!

loverofanus 2008-02-06 22:20:58

Don't listen to Intero, seriously.
I agree with P34C3, "Funny Piano Remix' needs to be vinyl. I suggest submitting it to the London Philharmonic, that song would be lovely in orchestra. I believe the conductors name is Keaton, send him a ring!
Keep up the good work.

SilentTakedown 2008-02-07 12:22:24

Don't make me laugh. xD

WritersBlock 2008-02-09 05:36:51

Seriously?
Intero was spot on.
Right now it appears that you don't know very much about how music is constructed. I've been learning classical theory for 5 years, and performing classical guitar and piano for 7 years. Listening to your stuff is embarassing. If you were any kind of god some people say you are, then you'd probably know that is more avant garde more than contemporary consonance. Listen to music by MaestroRage. Now, HE could probably send his stuff to the London Philharmonic without them pissing themselves laughing. He's one of the very few that could. The fact is that if you want to be taken seriously and get some honest reviews and some real criticisms, you've got to learn more about how to compose. Right now, it sounds like you couldn't tell me what a key signature, or a treble clef or a semibreve is without looking it up. Try and learn something, listen to some other music on newgrounds, come back and try again. The thing is, the majority of newgrounds users won't leave a review for something that sounds like it was made with little to no effort. The reviews make you sound better than you are. I know it's a harsh comment, but that's pretty much saying that you don't need to make improvements, and, as a beginner musician, you should know that you've got to work a fair way before you actually earn a good score from a well respected critic. Wake up and smell the roses! These guys are leaving kind remarks, there's no sincerity in it. Ask around, learn some more about composing music. Anyone can make music, but it takes commitment and talent to be great at it. Keep trying and you might get some real respect from proper musicians.

Sorry to tell you the way things are, but let me tell you that it's much better getting honest criticism than positive reviews. I'd hate to have people like P34C3 and loverofanus to tell me I'm god. If they told me the same thing they told you, I'd laugh. "I think you should send this to an orchestra" I wouldn't take that seriously. They are professionals, they train for years upon years, they perform professional music by professional composers. These guys are talking out of their asses.